This is my bloom's activities from this week we read the story "Past or Present"
Thursday, 19 May 2016
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Keithleen, I like the way you have explained the question and then worked it out. I think you could have included detail on how the bullies can change and fix their problems. I think on slide number 7 you could have included more punctuation e.g full stops, so that it becomes easier to read. But I liked the way you highlighted the title to show it was the main subject.
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ReplyDeleteHi Keithleen, your post is very interesting and detailed. I liked the way that you put examples of what could happen.How did you come up with the idea because your ideas are well written? I think you could use more punctuation to make it even better. Siobhan
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